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Tip #139: Agree with the nearer subject with nor/or

7/13/2017

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Recently we’ve been addressing the importance of precision of language in technical writing because it can make the difference between less effective and more effective presentations.  Two posts ago we examined the differences between personal and personnel.  Then in the last post we highlighted the distinctions between capital and capitol.  In this post we will consider nor and or.

Most writers understand that nor always follows neither, and or always follows either.  But some get confused when confronted with subject-verb agreement, especially if one element of the neither/either construction is singular and the other is plural.  If both elements are either singular or plural, no confusion exists.  It’s when one element is one and the other the other that the question gets raised.

For instance, consider this example sentence:


Either the welding material or the welding procedure was changed.

Most writers don’t have any issues here.  Both material and procedure are singular, so the verb to be is conjugated with a singular form.  But what if there is really more than one welding material (which is common in real life) but only one welding procedure (also common in real life) for a particular application?

The number adopted by the verb conjugation should match the number of the closer subject element.  Thus, we could have either of the following sentences:

Either the welding materials or the welding procedure was changed.

Either the welding procedure or the welding materials were changed.

Both of these sentences are correct.  Notice that the first sentence has the subject procedure closer to the verb; procedure is singular, so the verb is singular (was).  But the second sentence has the subject materials closer to the verb; materials is plural, so the verb is plural (were).  The same rule applies to neither/nor as it does to either/or.

So when using nor/or, agree your verb with the nearer subject.  Precision of language provides that attention to detail which will not only present your message more effectively but also better represent both you and your brand in the minds of your audience.
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Tip #116: Be parallel with either either/or or neither/nor

8/11/2016

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Recently w’ve been giving homage to a tried-and-true guideline of more effective technical writing — recognizing the differences between spoken English and written English.  A related but distinct guideline is to employ precision in one’s language.  Writers must employ such precision with constructions involving the conjunctions or and nor in order to produce more effective technical writing.

Or always follows either, and nor always follows neither.  Writing which uses neither/or or either/nor constructions show obvious amateurism and as such contribute to less effective technical writing.  Most technical writers easily avoid such errors.

However, many technical writers accept a more common error associated with the conjunctions or and nor.  They forget to establish a parallel structure.  Where needed, parallel structures always contribute to more effective technical writing.

Consider the example sentence in the cropped graphic above.  The writer has used neither/nor with an appropriate parallel structure.  How can you tell?  Just look at the elements in the neither/nor construction.  The first element is between neither and nor.


the material selection

And the second element is between nor and the verb.

the welding procedure

Both of these elements are the same type of phrase (in this case, noun phrases), and as such the resulting structure is parallel.  Had the sentence instead appeared as something like

Neither the material selection nor welding the joint with a TIG process accommodated the changed environment which precipitated the failure.

the structure would not be parallel.  The first element remains unchanged, but the second element is now a verb phrase, which differs from a noun phrase.  Even if one were to argue that welding the joint with a TIG process is a gerund phrase and hence being used a noun, the writer still has a noun being used as a noun for one element and a verb being used as a noun for the other.  The structure still lacks complete parallelism and with it a measure of effectiveness.

To reintroduce parallelism, the writer could write the sentence to read

Neither selecting the 316L stainless steel nor welding the join with a TIG process accommodated the changed environment which precipitated the failure.

This version is grammatically correct and parallel in structure.  It’s also a bit wordy.  Compare that sentence to the original version in the cropped graphic above.  Clearly the more concise original is more effective.

Don’t forget to be parallel with either either/or or neither/nor.  You’ll produce stronger technical writing that will more effectively communicate your message.  And a more effective presentation will better represent you and your brands to your audience.
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    Howdy!  I'm Lance, Managing Editor of words by kurt.  I'm also an engineer and an educator.  With degrees in both engineering and English, I've been providing writing-related services since 1997, and I want to help my fellow engineers become better writers.  That's why in 2014 I started providing free writing tips via this blog.  Enjoy!

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